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ONAJI 004 - first day ruka

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mattwilson83
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This is a yuri Romance strip, and this first strip is an introduction to the characters. 

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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

There is not really much to say other than - this manga/comic is really grate. You shore know what you are writing about - for a guy. Now don't get me wrong. You do you. And by that I meen this comic. But why does it feel (in later parts atlist) Like something pulls this lovely girls one away from another? It may be just me but hey, it does okay. Anyway as far as I can tell - this is your bests comic yet. And before you say anything - i am giving a critique on your entire comic not just this obe page.