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Naruto: NaruHina CH04: page 71 by *mattwilson83:iconmattwilson83:


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Naruto and its characters © Masashi Kishimoto

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Chapter 4 of my Naruto Doujin. The date has gone well, but will the blossoming romance last?

Comments and critique about this is very welcome and much appreciated.

Links:

Previous chapters:
Chapter 1 Cover: [link]
Chapter 2 Cover: [link]
Chapter 3 Cover: [link]
Chapter 4 Cover: [link]

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*H4rpu14:iconH4rpu14: Mar 30, 2008, 4:58:39 AM
and... First...again!!!!
Sorry, but :
1. You make Sasuke's hair too spiky
2. Hiashi's forehead like have a mark

Anyway, Keep it up, Matt! I like your storyline
*mattwilson83:iconmattwilson83: Mar 30, 2008, 5:03:46 AM
1. Thanx. My sasuke is improving, but i still need comments like that!
2. It's not a mark, they are wrinkles (Hiashi has frown marks.)

Thanx , I will! I've got a lot of storyline left. I'm trying to get up to a NaruHina marriage (so the story will take place over a few years), and the Masaru gang storyline is coming to a conclusion over the next few chapters.
*H4rpu14:iconH4rpu14: Mar 30, 2008, 5:21:26 AM
You shouldn't talk to anyone about your ending. It won't be a surprise for your fans.
Btw, Marriage? Didn't it too fast for them? They just 15 or16
*mattwilson83:iconmattwilson83: Mar 30, 2008, 5:26:09 AM
In brackets it says the story takes place over a few years! :D and at the moment they are almost 16.
*H4rpu14:iconH4rpu14: Mar 30, 2008, 5:52:47 AM
I must missed that part ^_^.
Anyway, I want to know how you will draw their wedding clothes. I'll wait until the time come! :)
=darkangel0921:icondarkangel0921: Mar 30, 2008, 7:31:15 AM
:D

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this is me at band practice :sleepy:
this is me at home :tunes:
this is me at school :sarcasm:
this is me at my time of the month :noes: :chainsaw: (and yes i know how to use power tools) :mwahaha:
GO NARUHINA :#1:
~SayukiHorozuko:iconSayukiHorozuko: Mar 31, 2008, 11:38:58 AM
If Hiashi keeps frowning like that it'll stick that way forever :XD:

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Shigure:High school girls! High school girls!
Me:*looks at him admirably* my hero
Haru:*sharpen sword* not for long
Naruto: DATTEBAYO YER MOM!
Me: OBJECTION!
Haru:To what?
Me:TO YER FACE!
Hinata:This isn't my Icha Icha book!
Me: Sure...:devilish:
~Jinchuuriki15:iconJinchuuriki15: Apr 1, 2008, 10:38:00 AM
lol

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What do you when you mix a horny Sasuke, a naked Naruto, whipcream, cherries and chocolate...?

There was never an answer....coz it was always obvious! XD
~NaruHinaShikTem4eva:iconNaruHinaShikTem4eva: Apr 6, 2008, 2:32:37 PM
SASUSAKU!!!!!!!!!

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Your application to remain a member of the human race has been rejected. Therefore, at 12 Oh 1 am tomorrow, the world will stop, and you will get off. (WHAT THE HECK IS WITH THE MUDKIP ICON?!?!?!?!?!? it"s annoying!!! I'M REPORTING WHOEVER DID IT)