Naruto: NaruHina CH04: page 65

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Chapter 4 of my Naruto Doujin. The date has gone well, but will the blossoming romance last?

I'm not too sure about the writing on this page. I'm trying to show Naruto's dislike of being referred to as a Failure/Loser, and Hinata's inability to really say what she means, while trying not to upset anyone, even if there not there. I think it works ok, but what do you think?

[EDIT] Through the Magic of Photoshop i have erased the tears from naruto's eyes. And for those who commented on them... you were right and it looks a lot better!

Comments and critique about this is very welcome and much appreciated.

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