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Naruto and its characters © Masashi Kishimoto
NHC story © me
Read Right to left <--------------------
Comments and critique about this is very welcome and much appreciated.
Previous volumes:
Volume 1 Volume 2 Volume 3 Volume 4 Volume 5
Volume 6 Volume 7 Volume 8 Volume 9 Volume 10
Volume 11 Volume 12 Volume 13 Volume 14 Volume 15
Volume 16 Volume 17 Volume 18 Volume 19
Chapters:
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Chapter 153
Chapter 154
Chapter 155
Chapter 156
Chapter 157
Chapter 158
Chapter 159
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Chapter 160 Cover
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WARNING: to those of you who do not currently like to read the Hanabi Moegi plot line, you may wish to hold off until Page 4 comes out. Despite I know and understand the 'cramped' plotlines of the two simliar stories with the girls, I must continue as I intended, so either wait and pass over to page 3134, OR, read, and keep comments to evidential critique.
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I've never really liked those "top ten" videos on youtube where the author knew his opinion wasn't going to be shared and claimed "is my own opinion" and those who were offended too didn't like them... everyone is entitled to their opinion, and I find hard to believe those that hate "HanaMoe" ( ) whatever if it is because is lesbians or because is they felt rushed or whatever other reason will make grown up comments (evidential critique as you say) I don't hate it... I just don't like it... not because of yuri but because she is her best friend!!! damn even if she was that other guy (forgot his name team mate of Konohamaru) instead of her I still be against it
Ok, now we know that she never had strong feelings for Konohamaru (and maybe you will later add that him didn't had those feelings either and was just copying Naruto) but then again I'm always against shallow relationships... (funny for those that know me)
Ok, is your story, go with the plotline that you got planed and felt it was right, just because I don't like it doesn't mean you have to change it or even care for my opinion, heck you probably aren't even gonna read this one comment and just delete it, (that reminds me almost no one coments on my pictures... just one good friend who btw I have failed him) witht that said I am gonna jump to page 3134
Ok, now we know that she never had strong feelings for Konohamaru (and maybe you will later add that him didn't had those feelings either and was just copying Naruto) but then again I'm always against shallow relationships... (funny for those that know me)
Ok, is your story, go with the plotline that you got planed and felt it was right, just because I don't like it doesn't mean you have to change it or even care for my opinion, heck you probably aren't even gonna read this one comment and just delete it, (that reminds me almost no one coments on my pictures... just one good friend who btw I have failed him) witht that said I am gonna jump to page 3134