Whoa this is totally BAD@$$ I have never seen anything like this, I read lots of fanfictions about this but to finally see and this well drawn is so cool. I'm really glad you did this and all birthday request for that matter.
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You know, I actually found some fanfic where Hinata was Jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tailed Fox instead of Naruto, and it seems much better to me than the original canon. Especially because I still think Kyuubi should be female, it would make much more sense than she being a male. After all, who can wreak a havoc better than girl? *grins*